Kia ora my name is Valencia my class room is LS1. In LS1 we have been learning how to write a recount using the TREE structure. We were allowed to pick a picture as long as it fit the TREE structure. A recount is a story that has already happened. Here is my work for an example.
The Museum
On Monday my best friend and I went to the museum first, then we went on a bus to go to the museum. It took 10 minutes to get there. In a moment we were there in a flash. It seemed like we were on the bus for ten seconds .
When we got there the first room we went to was a stranded island. There were wild sharks that were surrounding the island and there were monkeys climbing the trees were humongous no one could climb. It was like they reached all the way up to heaven .
Then we heard a booming roar. It was a fearless black panther. We sprintedand in one of the abandoned houses the black panther walked past the house we were hiding in .”That was a close call I said”!At last a humongous pirate ship came and rescued us and took us to safety and the Adventure was over. I felt relieved that it was over. I was frightened there at the end.. I was very exhausted. I am happy we went there.We were horrified.